Sadye Ovalles
Thursday, August 4, 2011
Does this sound like a good prophecy?
The first line is good, the second line is pretty good, the third line needs help. It flows it flows and then... plop. The sentence falls from the sky, and not gracefully either. I wish I could help, but I don't have any details. Good luck!
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